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[flametheif40]

How is my Driving?

Player: Quad

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concrit

got suggestions or ideas how to Role play? just wanna say hi? I'm open to all of em :)

Comments

[livingimpaired]

Hello. I'm just going to give a small bit of critique. It's mostly on the tag format themselves -- just paying more attention to punctuation and grammar. Sometimes, the spelling can be a bit off as well, but otherwise, everything is okay. (salutes)

Ops!

[flametheif40]

Sure thing! Thanks for the pointer! I'll try to re-read them and double check. Enjoy playing with you so far, hope it stays great :)