HMD

[flametheif40]

How is my Driving?

Player: Quad

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got suggestions or ideas how to Role play? just wanna say hi? I'm open to all of em :)

Comments

[livingimpaired]

Hello. I'm just going to give a small bit of critique. It's mostly on the tag format themselves -- just paying more attention to punctuation and grammar. Sometimes, the spelling can be a bit off as well, but otherwise, everything is okay. (salutes)

Ops!

[flametheif40]

Sure thing! Thanks for the pointer! I'll try to re-read them and double check. Enjoy playing with you so far, hope it stays great :)

[optimistical]

Hi there! Just echoing the critique that was left above and I would like to suggest that you pay closer attention to the grammar in your tags. The most common mistakes I've noticed so far was mixing up "you're" and "your". For one tag, you even wrote "you" instead of "you're", so I would recommend that you just double check and reread your tags before sending them! Or even install Grammarly on your browser.

It would make your tags a lot easier to read and then reply to!

[flametheif40]

Annnnd I just gave in and installed Grammarly. Which, yes. It is so much easier now!

It was starting to drive me nuts trying to edit myself as I went along, only for me to notice I still messed up later.

So thank you for the suggestion! :)